Giving and Receiving Critiques
Things
every Froghound member should keep in mind.
You joined our little group as you really want to
critique the work of others, right? Actually I’d guess you’re here to have your
own work critiqued, after all that’s the primary reason we all joined. I
believe however that to gain the most from having your work critiqued you need
to learn to give a good critique. Once you understand how to give honest useful
feedback on others work the feedback you receive will have more meaning and
depth for you. Please review the first section on giving critiques and think
about the points made. Internalizing these points will make receiving critiques
easier for everyone.
Giving
Critiques
Critiquing the work of others requires balance. Being too
nice will not help your fellow writers develop their work; being too harsh can
crush a writer’s ego (particularly new writers, who tend to be shy about
sharing their work). How can you achieve the right balance? Here are some tips:
Take care to point out both what works, and what doesn’t. If you’re new to critiquing, a good hint would be to point
out one thing you like (a phrase, a description, an idea) for each thing that
bothered you.
Whenever possible, be specific when pointing out things that
you didn’t like (don’t just say “I didn’t like this
part” or “I’d cut that,” say “I didn’t like this part because…” or “I’d cut
that because…”). The Froghound group expects there to
be some meat behind every opinion given, please think about explaining your
opinion before you verbalize it.
Try to offer suggestions when you think a change is needed. Suggestions, even to the point of an offered rewording, can
be very helpful; even if the suggestion isn’t exactly right for the author to
use, he or she may get a good idea from it, or at least a better understanding
of the point you are trying to make.
Be honest and direct, but in a polite and caring way. Holding back your feelings about a piece because you’re
afraid to share your thoughts isn’t going to help anyone. Just be mindful of
how you share your opinions!
Your opinions are just that, your opinions. If the author doesn’t take your advice don’t take it personally.
You wouldn’t implement others critiques without first thinking about them, and
even then you most likely you’ll put your own spin on it.
Receiving
Critiques
How you handle critiques you receive is just as important as
how you give them to others. It’s perfectly natural to want to defend your
work, but it isn’t a healthy thing to do in a writers’ group. When receiving a
critique, here are a few things to bear in mind:
Don’t argue with someone’s critique of your work. If you don’t like the changes he or she has suggested, just
say “Thank you,” and move on. After all, a critique is an opinion, and we’re all
entitled to our own opinions.
Feel free to ask questions. Sometimes, asking a person to clarify what he or she has
said in a critique will help you to see why that suggestion was made.
You’re the author, and you have the final say. So, remember as you receive critiques that it is your
prerogative to accept or reject any suggestions made. This is a useful tip to
keep in mind when the group is pretty evenly divided on a particular point
(which will likely be most of the time). Don’t feel like you have to change
something just because someone in the group didn’t like it; but also don’t make
any overly hasty judgments about critiques you receive (sometimes they make
more sense when you go back and look at them later).
If everyone in the group has the same comment, chances are
they’re right. You may not agree, and it’s still
your right to reject their opinion, but generally speaking, if everyone has the
same reaction, there’s probably something to it.
You can save time (and add value) by providing printed
copies of the work to be critiqued. Then, rather than pointing out each typo,
the group can simply discuss larger issues, and the author can take the
handouts back to check for line edits later. You can also make it your practice
to avoid repetitious comments (if a member has already said what you were
thinking, simply say “I agree with…” and continue to the next point). Having
printed copies with members’ notes also reduces the author’s need to take notes
as the critiques are received, allowing the author to listen more carefully and
ask better follow-up questions.
Credits
Special
thanks to the 6’ Ferret Writers Groups, the Calhoun-Gordon Country Writers’
Guild and D.M. Rosner for the material I found on the
internet. These materials formed the basis for this. To be fully honest most of
this paper was taken directly from their websites.
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